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  1. I Love it! The only thing is, it's hard to see emotion and action in 2D so I was confronted with the thought that this could be a robot bewildered by the flower or apathetic since he/she does not appear to have olfactory senses or amusement by looking at the flower. Just thought I'd let you know that's the very next thing that entered my mind after thinking it's cute.
  2. It looks pretty good. There is an error of the middle toe of the cat, and grammatically you should say "if you are a pitbull lover" since the word following "a" starts with a consonant not a vowel sound. This article explains it well: https://writingexplained.org/a-vs-an-difference I actually agree with zsooofija that the outline of the text looks a little off. All well wishes!
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