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Pink City, Jaipur, India

Aris Abdullah
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Is the foreground way too dark?


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not for me but composition is lacking cutting off everything. it's part of the story. you even have a half of a person?? c-mon.Aris.

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Aris. your problem is trying to Put to much into the frame. and your cutting Body parts off. If ya wanna get close get a Long lens. using a wide lens is killing your composition. Just go tell us stories about the sights,smells and sounds of where you are. people wanna see that. Not people with Legs and arms cut off. Thats not telling a story. Thats killing a story.

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I see your works are deteriorating from your first few post. Just remember this, the eyes always attracted to light. Its goes to the brighter part when viewing photo. The compo and brightness tells subject of interest was at the background. The large part of foreground was in shadow. As being point out by Laurin, very poor composition. IMO, brighten the FG might even be worse. You should know dodge and burn is one of tools always being applied. One of the useful purpose was to brighten the part to draw attention, darken the part to hide something not really wanted. For your picture, some cropping may work but still not the best. Hope this help.    

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